Takumi, good start. The picture is a bit confronting. With a summary you need to include a good overview of the information contained in the article. Your summary leaves out some information covered in the BBC article. Are you interested in researching this as a topic? What would you concentrate on? How would you approach the material?
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Takumi, good start. The picture is a bit confronting. With a summary you need to include a good overview of the information contained in the article. Your summary leaves out some information covered in the BBC article. Are you interested in researching this as a topic? What would you concentrate on? How would you approach the material?
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